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AnnaRooks

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Personal Project Updates
« on: May 15, 2015, 12:35:28 am »
im making a sword out of paper, and i have finished planning
feedback would be appreciated  ;D

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Re: Personal Project Update
« Reply #1 on: May 15, 2015, 02:32:51 am »
Quite simple. Adding color would make it better, otherwise, good sketch.
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Re: Personal Project Update
« Reply #2 on: May 15, 2015, 03:38:34 am »
yea, cant really think of what colours to use :/
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Re: Personal Project Updates
« Reply #3 on: May 16, 2015, 12:35:07 am »
i made a life sized sketch, this picture is also sized a bit smaller than the last one(woops)
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Re: Personal Project Updates
« Reply #4 on: May 16, 2015, 01:16:06 am »
I see improvement.
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Re: Personal Project Updates
« Reply #5 on: May 16, 2015, 01:18:54 am »
shard's crossguard seems i bit off, may fine tune or change it completely. cant really find a good design for one

i have a design in my head, but i think ill use it for roll
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Re: Personal Project Updates
« Reply #6 on: May 16, 2015, 02:21:16 am »
the parts you have shaded black should be red, that joule should be red, the blade should be light grey, and +--|==> the middle part should be dark gray. the handle should be a little darker than the blade





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Re: Personal Project Updates
« Reply #7 on: May 16, 2015, 05:44:28 pm »
when you say the middle part, do you mean the crossguard or the one shaded black on the blade?
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Re: Personal Project Updates
« Reply #8 on: May 17, 2015, 04:13:11 pm »
Crossguard, that's the word





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Re: Personal Project Updates
« Reply #9 on: May 17, 2015, 05:54:34 pm »
err... i didnt like the crossguard, so i made a new one

i think ill need to think of some new colours tho  :-\

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Re: Personal Project Updates
« Reply #10 on: May 17, 2015, 07:17:47 pm »
I feel like different tones of blue with the border white would look nice.
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Re: Personal Project Updates
« Reply #11 on: May 17, 2015, 07:21:47 pm »
1st thing i noticed was this :o


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Re: Personal Project Updates
« Reply #12 on: May 17, 2015, 07:28:26 pm »
I feel like different tones of blue with the border white would look nice.

blue is not my colour, dont like, might keep altus's suggestion of red themed
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Re: Personal Project Updates
« Reply #13 on: May 17, 2015, 07:31:53 pm »
1st thing i noticed was this :o



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« Reply #14 on: May 17, 2015, 11:23:52 pm »