Personal Project Updates

[AnnaRooks]

im making a sword out of paper, and i have finished planning
feedback would be appreciated 

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[Noisy Boy]

Quite simple. Adding color would make it better, otherwise, good sketch.

[AnnaRooks]

yea, cant really think of what colours to use :/

[AnnaRooks]

i made a life sized sketch, this picture is also sized a bit smaller than the last one(woops)

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[Noisy Boy]

I see improvement.

[AnnaRooks]

shard's crossguard seems i bit off, may fine tune or change it completely. cant really find a good design for one

i have a design in my head, but i think ill use it for roll

[Altus Clura]

the parts you have shaded black should be red, that joule should be red, the blade should be light grey, and +--|==> the middle part should be dark gray. the handle should be a little darker than the blade

[AnnaRooks]

when you say the middle part, do you mean the crossguard or the one shaded black on the blade?

[Altus Clura]

Crossguard, that's the word

[AnnaRooks]

err... i didnt like the crossguard, so i made a new one

i think ill need to think of some new colours tho 

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"shard 3" is a funny name because the number 3 is everywhere in that design

[ShadedDusk]

I feel like different tones of blue with the border white would look nice.

[Lissy421]

1st thing i noticed was this

[AnnaRooks]

I feel like different tones of blue with the border white would look nice.

blue is not my colour, dont like, might keep altus's suggestion of red themed

[ShadedDusk]

1st thing i noticed was this

Turq could create a hole to the center of the Earth if she dropped that from high enough...

[Lissy421]